this is a really great and deep poem and the pictures fits it perfect.

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~Kel-Bel~
:johnnydepp:

Awww. Why are you so sad. I wanna make you feel all better. Ill kiss your boo boo's and they wont hurt anymore. PLease stop cutting, you must be gouing through some sad and cary times in your life but hurting yourself is not the answer. Yeah I know I sound all "I'm gonna save the world" but I'm not trying to. One of my friends did the same thing you do and I witnessed it first hand. It is a very ugly expirence and I do not wish it upon anyone ever. Try to find alternatives, like art, or poerty, even music. Try listening to AFI whenever you get the urge or chewing gum. Just find something, please.

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i fell into yesterday
our dreams seem not far away
i want, i want, i want to stay
i fell into fantasy
-AFI The Days of The Phoenix

take a gander at my gallery! [link]

I really like the straightforwardness of your poem... I really hope everything goes better soon...

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yOU, like EvEryon e else neeDs to feeL IMPORTANT



w her i end nd yu begi n

I know how you feel, sweetie, I'm going through something similar. it paints a very real picture, and that's why I love your writing. I know the feelings that run through this poem, they run through me too. so be comforted in at least the fact that someone knows how you feel.

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"I hate things that are diluted--I mean, you don't mix Jack Daniels with Coke. That's a sin!"
-Nikki Sixx

"I play Synyster Gates and I am guitar."

here for you... feel better soon, ne? or try, I know it's so difficult.

on another note, the poem was nice as an honest, raw piece. No flowery words to protect your feelings...

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"Is it safer to be unhappy? Nothing ever wants to take that away."~Pellaz, Wraeththu

tsuki no mahou wa... shalle a le rilla. amai koe de sasayaku kara mou ichido dake kanau nara te o tsunaide kimi to waraitai. U+K ~ Gackt Camui

It's an amazing poem, incredibly honest. It's rare to see something this honest.

your work is amazing as usual. i sincerely hope you feel better, and to help show that i care what happens to such a talented poet, here's a hug. don't give up, ok? there will be times when everyone feels down, but the only time when it will really hurt you is if it pushes you down and you decide you aren't going to get back up... and one more thing... i know that it's tempting to stay inside the bad feelings, but trying to see the light, while it might seem harder, is worth it in the long run... that's all i can say for now...

Deeply vivid and it gave me shivers just to how I can relate to it so well at the moment. Such beautifully suicidal images rushing through my head, again. Your poem was like Deja Vu to me. This is amazing. A Favourite now...

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"Oh yes.. there will be blood...."

Its been a while since i've read yoru stuff, but I must say this is amazing, as usual. You never disappoint me with your work. You need to create an anathology of your stuff and sell it. You'd make some damn good money.

Anyway. Your right. This is deep, raw emotion. I like how you portrayed your saddness, holding nothing back. Its simplistic, but beautiful.

~S

hearing we've all felt like that at one point or another wont help so I wont say it... just keep writing through it

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